While I appreciated your attempts to describe Mormonism, as an active member of the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints and a former missionary, I feel there were a multitude of misrepresentations in the piece.
If you are going to site Mormon beliefs the best practice would be to site trusted resources. Jan Shipps, an unbiased, non-Mormon is a great place to start.
I would also welcome, although not an official representative of my church, the opportunity to clarify the misconceptions perpetuated in your piece.
Brandon Peay
Coppell, Texas